Carnival, a haiku

Carnival, a haiku

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09-04-2011, 09:40 AM

Thanks for the feedback Leanne Smile

How about this:

Rides and cotton candy stalls.
Field of dying grass.
Parents lose sight of chidren.

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Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-03-2011, 01:40 PM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-03-2011, 03:47 PM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-03-2011, 04:46 PM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-04-2011, 09:33 AM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by Leanne - 09-04-2011, 09:37 AM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by heslopian - 09-04-2011, 09:40 AM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by Leanne - 09-04-2011, 09:42 AM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-04-2011, 09:42 AM

RE: Carnival, a haiku - by billy - 09-07-2011, 03:59 PM

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