08-31-2011, 09:49 AM
A great piece of nonsense rhyme 
. At the beginning the narration just seems funny and petty and snooty, but as you took it further and further to absurd lengths it turned the piece on its head and gave it a body, a depth. Didn't think "woo" was a necessary cap, but overall a likeable piece
. At the beginning the narration just seems funny and petty and snooty, but as you took it further and further to absurd lengths it turned the piece on its head and gave it a body, a depth. Didn't think "woo" was a necessary cap, but overall a likeable piece
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?