08-16-2011, 12:07 PM
Thanks for the kind words and feedback Bilbo.
I like your idea about "the pained, the passionate". I'll make the edit in a mo.
Yeah the very lust line is a real clunker. As soon as I can devise a better line which also keeps the form consistent I'll replace it.
I like your idea about "the pained, the passionate". I'll make the edit in a mo.
Yeah the very lust line is a real clunker. As soon as I can devise a better line which also keeps the form consistent I'll replace it.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe