Unsafe Haven
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(08-16-2011, 05:40 AM)billy Wrote:  thanks for replying. i do want to learn but feel a bit embarrassed. everyone here seems to be better than me.
i think i understand what you mean about fear and there being lots of kinds of it. are their any other words i used like torment and anguish that i should look at?

thanks again. i'll see if i can do some improvements later.
Everyone feels a bit unsure about posting their work and while you think people are better they all had to start somewhere. You're only in competition with yourself to put out the best work you're capable of, like everything else in life there are always people who are better. You'll get there if you stick with it and keep being open to learning and trying new things.

Best,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Messages In This Thread
Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-15-2011, 05:19 PM
RE: Unsafe Haven - by Todd - 08-15-2011, 11:22 PM
RE: Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-16-2011, 05:40 AM
RE: Unsafe Haven - by Todd - 08-16-2011, 10:58 AM
RE: Unsafe Haven - by ckeo - 08-16-2011, 10:26 AM
RE: Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-16-2011, 10:36 AM
RE: Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-16-2011, 11:04 AM



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