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08-16-2011, 10:36 AM

thanks for the feedback. i understand a little of what your saying about repetitive. in both instances, and i'll
try to see if i can bring myself to remove them. thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to do it i think it was helpful

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Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-15-2011, 05:19 PM

RE: Unsafe Haven - by Todd - 08-15-2011, 11:22 PM

RE: Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-16-2011, 05:40 AM

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RE: Unsafe Haven - by ckeo - 08-16-2011, 10:26 AM

RE: Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-16-2011, 10:36 AM

RE: Unsafe Haven - by billy - 08-16-2011, 11:04 AM

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