Unsafe Haven

[ckeo]

I have a very special place
my secret spot of sanity and peace (first lines states a special place, no need to talk about secret spot, comes off to me as repetitive)
in times of stress and self redress
in times of weakness too

it guides me in to rest a while (awhile instead maybe )

where warm solace
embraces all my breaks
those parts of me, that do not mesh
with normal souls

whose hearts
Are so displayed undressed (Again... "So displayed" and on show.. is repetitave)
on show for all the world
to view, loves and dreams
like shiny silver screens of soul

unlike my own, whose
torment, anguish
fear and constant consternations (I like consternations, its a word I don`t hear often... I would rework to do away with torment anguish and fear)
can only show, with
shyly lacking confidence

a sorrowed beating heart

alone and safe
within a very special place
alone within my soul

I like what you are trying to say... I dont think it would take much work to clean it up.