08-11-2011, 10:41 PM
Thanks for the feedback Bilbo
The poem originally ended with a separate tercet about the sun arriving at our gables and swallowing us all up, but I thought the poem would be leaner and more focused if I cut them.
The poem originally ended with a separate tercet about the sun arriving at our gables and swallowing us all up, but I thought the poem would be leaner and more focused if I cut them.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe