The Unknown Warrens
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Thank you for the kind words and feedback Todd.
Instead of tupperware, how about "like a beef joint in a breakfast bowl"?
I love the idea of eating, drinking and smoking the balms. It makes the balms seem more solid and real. I'll use your edit once I've finished this.
Thanks for the heads up on the typo.
I'll cut the second "whereas."
Thanks again for your great commentSmile
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The Unknown Warrens - by heslopian - 08-10-2011, 08:12 AM
RE: The Unknown Warrens - by Todd - 08-10-2011, 09:01 AM
RE: The Unknown Warrens - by heslopian - 08-10-2011, 03:21 PM
RE: The Unknown Warrens - by Todd - 08-11-2011, 12:22 AM
RE: The Unknown Warrens. - by billy - 08-12-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: The Unknown Warrens. - by heslopian - 08-13-2011, 01:36 PM



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