08-07-2011, 11:58 AM
Wonderful lines Jack.
I agree with Billy's point. To my mind a suicide note is what you want to tell them, often not what they need to know.
I love the brilliant tree lines and the fact that the speaker knows Tony will never leave her and even if he did there would be the same soul-destroying banal life.
This makes me want to try my own suicide note...um in a poem
I agree with Billy's point. To my mind a suicide note is what you want to tell them, often not what they need to know.
I love the brilliant tree lines and the fact that the speaker knows Tony will never leave her and even if he did there would be the same soul-destroying banal life.
This makes me want to try my own suicide note...um in a poem
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson