Suicide Note
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i thought it quite profound, some good 1st person lines.
make this personal to us all. what i do think is that;
'That is all there is to say.' seems to be a misnomer the reason
say that is because you then continue with lots of other stuff.
other than that, i thought it a good example of a working class
pov wife who's had enough.
i like the personal touch of;

Of wondering if Tony's wife.

i feel as though you're talking to me.
thanks for the read.
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Suicide Note - by heslopian - 08-07-2011, 10:38 AM
RE: Suicide Note - by billy - 08-07-2011, 11:04 AM
RE: Suicide Note - by heslopian - 08-07-2011, 11:31 AM
RE: Suicide Note - by Todd - 08-07-2011, 11:58 AM
RE: Suicide Note - by heslopian - 08-07-2011, 01:04 PM
RE: Suicide Note - by addy - 08-08-2011, 02:28 PM
RE: Suicide Note - by heslopian - 08-08-2011, 06:00 PM



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