08-05-2011, 09:56 AM
(07-28-2011, 07:36 PM)Heslopian Wrote: There are no such things as imaginary worlds.apart from what i see as a bit of baggage the poem works really well.
The places spoke about in books, is 'the' needed
lands of elves and lion gods,
are patched together from our own is 'are' needed
boring universe, like a poor girl's dress is 'like' needed or could you make a good metaphor?
stitched into being with carpet samples.
We as humans cannot grasp is 'we as' needed?
a plain beyond our own. We have no knowledge
of what we can't see. Thus fantasy is 'thus' needed?
is really truth we make mosaics of. is 'really' needed?
i particularly like the last verse. which puts fantasy into some kind of perspective.
thanks for the read.
