Death by Shaving:

[billy]

1st edit. on an idea purloined and altered from Todd's feedback.

Upward, Mister cut-throat
slides stealthy, shearing soap
and sprout, colouring concave
silver in snow-cone white.
The dead neck
screams red

The cut of clichéd steel.
Cold, hard, hair-splitting sharp.
bristles , brilliant bristles
follically fulsome, facing forward

Original

The cut of clichéd steel.
Cold, hard, hair-splitting sharp.
bristles , brilliant bristles
follically fulsome, facing forward
and upward. Mister cut-throat
slides stealthy, shearing soap
and sprout, colouring concave
silver in snow-cone white.
The dead neck
screams red