Beasts of Burden
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Big Grin You don't like the enjambment, Todd does, do we have a tiebreaker?

Thanks very much, Billy -- your reading was not how I saw it, but I like it a lot through that filter and it's most certainly not wrong, it works perfectly.

I especially hadn't thought of a butterfly in the last, I was thinking more of angel wings or something along those lines, but butterflies are new beginnings and I really enjoy that idea. Different interpretations make me happy Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 07-30-2011, 08:46 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Todd - 07-31-2011, 01:02 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 07-31-2011, 06:57 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by billy - 07-31-2011, 09:37 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 07-31-2011, 10:55 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 05:31 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Wildcard - 11-30-2012, 05:59 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 11-30-2012, 11:31 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Wildcard - 12-01-2012, 01:02 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 12-01-2012, 05:11 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 12-01-2012, 05:34 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Wildcard - 12-01-2012, 06:23 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by billy - 12-01-2012, 07:21 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Todd - 12-01-2012, 07:46 AM
RE: Beasts of Burden - by Leanne - 12-01-2012, 07:35 AM



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