Rabbit (REVISION)

[mroning tide]

EDIT 3
Fear has spoken you
fashioning eyes and ears
lacing cold quicksilver through sinew
cast out your dark affirmations
which draw you quarry to hunter
step down
this vigil
this lifetime of atonement

EDIT 2
Fear has spoken you
fashioning eyes and ears
lacing cold quicksilver through sinews
cast out your dark poetry
which draws you quarry to hunter
step down
this vigil
this lifetime of atonement

EDIT 1
Fear has spoken you
fashioning eyes and ears
lacing cold quicksilver through sinews
cast out your dark poetry
which draws you as quarry to your hunter
step down
this vigil
this lifetime of atonement

ORIGINAL
Fear has spoken you
fashioning your eyes and ears
lacing cold quicksilver through your sinews
cast out your dark poetry
which draws you as quarry to your hunter
step down
this vigil
this lifetime of atonement