Just As Well

[billy]

In the end, it's just as well
you leave, suggest I "Go to hell!"
Your clock was fast, my mind was slow.
Had we reset them long ago,

by now you might have been aware
how skilled I am at solitaire.
I might have seen the games you played
of musical-cabs and masquerade

ICSoria
©2011

great 1st verse, i like the dry humour of it, the 2nd not as funny but still good. not sure about the repetition of might, would it better if one of them were changed? the rhyme scheme is good enough to not notice.

not sure if you meant the 1st line to have 3 1/2 feet and the last 4 1/2
(the rest all have 4.) it still works for me as is. just wondering?

thanks for an enjoyable read.