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Just As Well
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07-27-2011, 11:18 AM
I really like this... the game metaphors, coupled with the images of time, mixed very nicely into a picture of two people who tried to be in tune but went out of synch (or were out of synch all along). It immediately imbues the poem with a lively energy an pace that I like. Very clever, very fun.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Just As Well - by ICSoria - 07-27-2011, 07:06 AM
RE: Just As Well - by Todd - 07-27-2011, 07:17 AM
RE: Just As Well - by ICSoria - 07-27-2011, 07:23 AM
RE: Just As Well - by addy - 07-27-2011, 11:18 AM
RE: Just As Well - by ICSoria - 07-27-2011, 01:09 PM
RE: Just As Well - by billy - 07-27-2011, 02:31 PM
RE: Just As Well - by ICSoria - 08-05-2011, 02:26 PM
RE: Just As Well - by billy - 08-05-2011, 03:08 PM
RE: Just As Well - by ICSoria - 08-05-2011, 05:15 PM
RE: Just As Well - by Leanne - 08-05-2011, 05:22 PM
RE: Just As Well - by ICSoria - 08-06-2011, 12:51 AM
RE: Just As Well - by Leanne - 08-06-2011, 07:17 AM
RE: Just As Well - by ICSoria - 08-06-2011, 07:43 AM
RE: Just As Well - by billy - 08-06-2011, 08:08 AM
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