Cicatrix
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for me the poem was the 1st 3 verse. the last two felt a little too brimstone and fire stuff.

i thought the 1st three were a great observational piece of poetry with a keen insight into cutters.
wasn't keen on "oft" jmo
thanks for the read.
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Cicatrix - by heslopian - 07-25-2011, 11:33 PM
RE: Cicatrix - by billy - 07-26-2011, 11:27 AM
RE: Cicatrix - by heslopian - 07-26-2011, 05:16 PM



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