Despair
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Thanks for the feedback and kind words LeanneSmile May I ask a question though? What exactly makes a line lyrical? You described my one syllable for each word poem on the practice thread as lyrical, and the sonnet I sent you as not. I'm not sure I quite get the difference.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 08:50 AM
RE: Despair - by Leanne - 07-19-2011, 09:04 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 09:17 AM
RE: Despair - by Leanne - 07-19-2011, 09:20 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 09:21 AM
RE: Despair - by billy - 07-19-2011, 10:02 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 10:18 AM
RE: Despair - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 08:06 AM
RE: Despair - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 08:08 AM
RE: Despair - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 02:00 PM
RE: Despair - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 05:26 PM



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