Sorrow for the Stars
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listen vika,
when i started writing poetry i was the worst offender of telling without showing,
i'm probably not much better now but we get the hang of things if we leave ourselves open.
if you can always be prepared to change what you write, six moths form now, you'll look back on some of your poems and think...mmmm that should be written like that, i guarantee it. that's if you want to improve Smile
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Sorrow for the Stars - by Vika - 07-10-2011, 03:01 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by billy - 07-10-2011, 03:19 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Vika - 07-10-2011, 03:26 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by billy - 07-10-2011, 03:34 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Vika - 07-10-2011, 03:50 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by billy - 07-10-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by addy - 07-11-2011, 09:45 AM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Vika - 07-11-2011, 08:01 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by addy - 07-13-2011, 09:12 AM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Todd - 07-11-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Vika - 02-05-2012, 06:22 AM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Vika - 07-12-2011, 07:47 AM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Erthona - 02-05-2012, 05:05 PM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by Philatone - 02-06-2012, 04:45 AM
RE: Sorrow for the Stars - by . . . . - 02-11-2012, 04:17 AM



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