07-09-2011, 03:41 AM
Hi, Owen!
Most women love it when their man takes the impetus to write something cloyingly sweet for them. This type of verse generally works well.
I won't regale you with tales of what my husband has been put through, since I am not one of them
As you branch out and write more, consider using rhythm without rhyme. It opens up more possibilities, since there are a finite number of rhymes in the English language. Unless you resort to amphigouri, of course.
Most women love it when their man takes the impetus to write something cloyingly sweet for them. This type of verse generally works well.
I won't regale you with tales of what my husband has been put through, since I am not one of them
As you branch out and write more, consider using rhythm without rhyme. It opens up more possibilities, since there are a finite number of rhymes in the English language. Unless you resort to amphigouri, of course.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?