07-07-2011, 05:35 AM
you g/friend loves it because she knows you wrote it.
often that's enough to love a poem.
for me it very cliché and hall mark. the hall mark thing means it's a lot like greeting card poetry...but not as good if it can be called good.
it often the type of poetry most people write when they first come to poetry, myself included.
becaues this is the mild crit forum, my two big suggestions are;
always try to write in an original way, say things in a way they haven't been said before.
2nd; never give up read lots of non forum poetry and keep writing.
often that's enough to love a poem.
for me it very cliché and hall mark. the hall mark thing means it's a lot like greeting card poetry...but not as good if it can be called good.
it often the type of poetry most people write when they first come to poetry, myself included.
becaues this is the mild crit forum, my two big suggestions are;
always try to write in an original way, say things in a way they haven't been said before.
2nd; never give up read lots of non forum poetry and keep writing.