07-07-2011, 04:11 AM
I was bored sitting in one of my locals and scribbled this. I know it's not that good, but it served it's purpose and made my girlfriend happy. She asked if I would put it here with my last one, so here you go. Thank you in advance for any comments.
O.
As sweet as a rose,
From you beauty flows,
My feelings just grow and grow,
This is love, I know.
When I look at you,
I know it to be true,
With you I never feel blue,
Such happiness I never knew.
With you I feel complete,
Every time we meet,
I can sense your heat,
My heart skips a beat.
Such sweetness you contain,
This you could not feign,
I find it hard to refrain,
So hard to stay sane.
I want you oh so bad,
It’s driving me completely mad,
I feel again like a young lad,
And with you I’m never sad.
O.
As sweet as a rose,
From you beauty flows,
My feelings just grow and grow,
This is love, I know.
When I look at you,
I know it to be true,
With you I never feel blue,
Such happiness I never knew.
With you I feel complete,
Every time we meet,
I can sense your heat,
My heart skips a beat.
Such sweetness you contain,
This you could not feign,
I find it hard to refrain,
So hard to stay sane.
I want you oh so bad,
It’s driving me completely mad,
I feel again like a young lad,
And with you I’m never sad.