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Russian Roulette
by Logan Glenn

We found a gun to play Russian roulette
Looked around and found one bullet
Sat in a circle and began the game
Pulled the trigger and nothing came
I’m hating the moment ill hear the sound
Of somebody hitting the ground
How could I pull the trigger
Killing the love of my life
No matter how this ends
It will cause great strife
I tell her I love her
Then the moment came
Pulled the trigger
And ended the game
With blood on my hands I look in the mirror
The only reason to live is gone
No love, Only pain
I look by the sink and find one bullet
Two people died playing Russian roulette
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Please rate and critique my poem. - by Logan - 02-09-2010, 11:46 AM
RE: Please rate and critique my poem. - by billy - 02-09-2010, 01:18 PM
RE: Please rate and critique my poem. - by addy - 02-09-2010, 04:53 PM



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