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The Haunted House
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06-25-2011, 11:33 AM
I'm British and your comments on meter were perfectly valid. This is the first sonnet I wrote so I can't exactly expect the meter to be on the same level as Tennyson's. With helpful critique though I may one day be a fifth the poet he was
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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RE: The Haunted House - by heslopian - 06-25-2011, 09:46 AM
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RE: The Haunted House - by Leanne - 06-25-2011, 11:19 AM
RE: The Haunted House - by heslopian - 06-25-2011, 11:33 AM
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