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"Reading."

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06-11-2011, 09:44 AM

Instead of "wrote", perhaps "written" would work better... but that's all I've got Smile

The last couple of lines gave me a goosebump or two, very effective.

It could be worse

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"Reading." - by Ris Yerg - 05-29-2011, 02:40 PM

RE: "Reading." - by billy - 05-30-2011, 09:54 AM

RE: "Reading." - by Leanne - 06-11-2011, 09:44 AM

RE: "Reading." - by Ris Yerg - 06-11-2011, 03:54 PM

RE: "Reading." - by addy - 06-14-2011, 03:46 PM

RE: "Reading." - by Ris Yerg - 06-14-2011, 03:59 PM

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