06-01-2011, 11:34 AM
I adore the richness of the internal world you put forward, there's something welcoming yet at the same time unfathomable about it. There's probably some repetition in this piece that can be cut out, but there are other thematic repetitions worth keeping (for example, the red blue and purples as images for bruises/pain but also vibrancy). A wonderfully evocative vibe. Thanks for the share 
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?