Waltz of the tiny heart

Waltz of the tiny heart

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06-01-2011, 08:11 AM

Your english is a-OK in this one, no worries Wink

I like the personification of the heart, and how you likened emotional recovery to a heart procedure. Such a nice, sweet piece! Thanks for the read Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Waltz of the tiny heart - by totalchuck - 06-01-2011, 02:33 AM

RE: Waltz of the tiny heart - by Ris Yerg - 06-01-2011, 02:51 AM

RE: Waltz of the tiny heart - by totalchuck - 06-01-2011, 03:30 AM

RE: Waltz of the tiny heart - by addy - 06-01-2011, 08:11 AM

RE: Waltz of the tiny heart - by billy - 06-01-2011, 09:59 AM

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