05-31-2011, 09:19 AM
for me it reads a lot better, it's amazing how such a small edit can take a poem up a notch.
nicely done.
nicely done.
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A Song of Empathy - by heslopian - 05-30-2011, 10:55 AM
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RE: A Song of Empathy - by heslopian - 05-30-2011, 12:00 PM
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RE: A Song of Empathy - by heslopian - 05-31-2011, 02:43 AM
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