05-30-2011, 12:21 PM
sorry jack my head must gave been up my arse, i meant to ask if the joy thing were needed?
as i felt profound empathy made it a little redundant, as did sunlight in the grave yard.
i don't think the 1st is weak though depression is an intangible to some extent. i just think the other two are stronger
with more passion and feeling. i just put the verses in order of liking is all.
as i felt profound empathy made it a little redundant, as did sunlight in the grave yard.
i don't think the 1st is weak though depression is an intangible to some extent. i just think the other two are stronger
with more passion and feeling. i just put the verses in order of liking is all.