05-24-2011, 11:34 PM
Heslopian,
This piece creates a wonderful mood of "darkness and damp". The last stanza especially resonated with me, although it works throughout. It's a soft and blurry rumination that is not too sharp, not too defined, as its theme demands. Liked it very much. I know this is not a technical critique; but the arrow struck home. Good work.
Pete
This piece creates a wonderful mood of "darkness and damp". The last stanza especially resonated with me, although it works throughout. It's a soft and blurry rumination that is not too sharp, not too defined, as its theme demands. Liked it very much. I know this is not a technical critique; but the arrow struck home. Good work.
Pete