The Garden of Death
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(05-20-2011, 11:12 PM)Heslopian Wrote:  The truly despairing, like the truly happy, simply are.
They do not need validation.
Perhaps there is a kind of peace in that.

Walking through the garden of death,
like angels wrapped in contentment,
the subconscious is a tonsil. [b]i have no idea why but i love this verse[/b]

Watch the flowers grow. Beginning in bloom,
bright petals drinking from the sky,
they mature into dust, those sentient beasts. [sentient beasts?]

the only snag i have jack,
is the flowers being sentient beasts after maturing into dust.

a great insight i the 1st verse.
the second is a great image.
thanks for the read

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The Garden of Death - by heslopian - 05-20-2011, 11:12 PM
RE: The Garden of Death - by Ris Yerg - 05-22-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: The Garden of Death - by heslopian - 05-22-2011, 09:02 PM
RE: The Garden of Death - by billy - 05-23-2011, 11:22 AM
RE: The Garden of Death - by heslopian - 05-23-2011, 12:02 PM
RE: The Garden of Death - by billy - 05-23-2011, 12:09 PM
RE: The Garden of Death - by heslopian - 05-23-2011, 12:39 PM
RE: The Garden of Death - by ficosdarkness - 05-23-2011, 09:50 PM



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