Lure
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Oh, Jack, Jack, Jack...I like the "On walls" part! Lol. Tongue

Billy, the title is meant to be vague and entirely weak compared to the poem, I just prefer that in my work. But thank you, glad you liked the poem part.

Addy, yes the comma must go, ugh, shame I didn't see it sooner I would have liked your experience to have been better. :/ Thanks so much though.
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Lure - by jadielue - 05-14-2011, 09:46 AM
RE: Lure - by billy - 05-14-2011, 02:00 PM
RE: Lure - by heslopian - 05-14-2011, 02:02 PM
RE: Lure - by addy - 05-14-2011, 03:26 PM
RE: Lure - by jadielue - 05-14-2011, 03:58 PM



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