Lure
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the title held little for me, i think it could have been more of a give away.

the poem however is another thing.
it gives a great image especially the last
it can't help but make me think of their blood.
in truth i don't think i'd fault any of it.

thanks for the read.
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Lure - by jadielue - 05-14-2011, 09:46 AM
RE: Lure - by billy - 05-14-2011, 02:00 PM
RE: Lure - by heslopian - 05-14-2011, 02:02 PM
RE: Lure - by addy - 05-14-2011, 03:26 PM
RE: Lure - by jadielue - 05-14-2011, 03:58 PM



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