05-10-2011, 08:43 AM
billy kath3 & addy,
It was always very important in our house that the boy child shine even on occasions that one might perceive it was my time to shine. I would always shift the attention to my brother. As I adore my brother it was never even a thought to do so, let alone an issue. I still hold him high upon that pedestal today. I had a rough childhood/life not entirely of my own making, but all that has rained down on him, he brought on himself because he has our mothers heart and wears it on his sleeve just as our mother. I've often wondered which is more painful. Pain inflicted by others or the pain that you get from others because you opened yourself up to it. I feel that through it all my brother is the most beautiful and curious creature I've ever encountered. I'm very pleased that you all get it, this means to me that you get me, very cool ladies and gents, very cool!
@ billy, I prayed that my mixing of metephors would come together in written word as they had in my minds eye, again very cool. King Midas and the story of Camelot were my absolute favorite stories when I was a child and I would often go to Camelot to hide from the greedy King when I was afraid or wounded. One thing if you will billy, could you please elaborate on your last critique about the "but" at the end?
You have all been the best! Kind, yet firm in your direction. Encouraging and critiquing with a perfect blend. Big big love to you all! Thank you again.
fd
It was always very important in our house that the boy child shine even on occasions that one might perceive it was my time to shine. I would always shift the attention to my brother. As I adore my brother it was never even a thought to do so, let alone an issue. I still hold him high upon that pedestal today. I had a rough childhood/life not entirely of my own making, but all that has rained down on him, he brought on himself because he has our mothers heart and wears it on his sleeve just as our mother. I've often wondered which is more painful. Pain inflicted by others or the pain that you get from others because you opened yourself up to it. I feel that through it all my brother is the most beautiful and curious creature I've ever encountered. I'm very pleased that you all get it, this means to me that you get me, very cool ladies and gents, very cool!
@ billy, I prayed that my mixing of metephors would come together in written word as they had in my minds eye, again very cool. King Midas and the story of Camelot were my absolute favorite stories when I was a child and I would often go to Camelot to hide from the greedy King when I was afraid or wounded. One thing if you will billy, could you please elaborate on your last critique about the "but" at the end?You have all been the best! Kind, yet firm in your direction. Encouraging and critiquing with a perfect blend. Big big love to you all! Thank you again.
fd