05-08-2011, 01:27 PM
You've been knocking it out of the park fd 
. Great poem about integrity and inner strength... your "character" in the face of your circumstances. The circumstances of the brass princess' birth were like a kick in the gut as I read it, but that ending that showed so much defiance and strength in it made me think "Yes. Yes." ... it's a liberating feeling which you've captured well.
. Great poem about integrity and inner strength... your "character" in the face of your circumstances. The circumstances of the brass princess' birth were like a kick in the gut as I read it, but that ending that showed so much defiance and strength in it made me think "Yes. Yes." ... it's a liberating feeling which you've captured well.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?