05-08-2011, 12:58 PM
I truly enjoyed this read very much.
Many powerful lines such as ....
Your birth was met with bliss on tap (I loved this line)
intoxicated with infinite pride (great description)
You and light share so much in his eyes (again, loved this line)
I am left to tarnish, baptized
in the salt water of our mothers tears. (full of emotion)
With a silent grace I except my position,
in the shade of the sun that you've eclipsed. (very profound)
and even though we feel sadness for the second child, we are rewarded with the knowledge that she holds acceptance and understanding of her place with pride, and as billy said ... "without resentment" indicating a strong and independant character.
very well done fd, thank you
Many powerful lines such as ....
Your birth was met with bliss on tap (I loved this line)
intoxicated with infinite pride (great description)
You and light share so much in his eyes (again, loved this line)
I am left to tarnish, baptized
in the salt water of our mothers tears. (full of emotion)
With a silent grace I except my position,
in the shade of the sun that you've eclipsed. (very profound)
and even though we feel sadness for the second child, we are rewarded with the knowledge that she holds acceptance and understanding of her place with pride, and as billy said ... "without resentment" indicating a strong and independant character.
very well done fd, thank you
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