~Don't Look Back~

[heslopian]

Your imagery here is almost perfect. This reminds me of Virginia Woolf, whose work often like one long dreamlike description conveying so much. Apart from the fact I think you meant "stealthily" in the first line (the other mistakes I see have already been pointed out by Billy) this is excellent. I'll give you a more in depth critique once I'd had some time to fully absorb the poem, which is incredibly rich.