~Don't Look Back~

[ficosdarkness]

A great read indeed, full of emotion, with a song and dance experienced by many I'm sure.
I loved how you ended the poem ... it's black ice on a highway.
Thank you ficosdarkness

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Thank you kath3 I'm so happy you enjoyed the read! "it's black ice on a highway." I really liked that image in my mind and I was hopeful that others would too, I'm very pleased that it worked out! I didn't even know that I was finished with it until I read it to myself outloud, all the thru and there I was.
Sincerely,
fd

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This is bloody gorgeous work. The emotion, the sometimes sedate but palpable pain... I especially love your narrative voice (which is very distinct in all your works), where the images and scenarios flow out like a deep, subconscious dream. There's a distinct lack of uptightness and guile to your flow and mental imaginary leaps... they sound deeply personal to you, and that very effectively sells it to the reader. I was hooked from beginning to end.

addy,
Wow and crazy love for you! Thank you for hearing me and for feeling my work! Just... wow! There are times with a poet's reader that resemble the motion of falling in love, from my POV. I give my heart to the poem, to the reader and say "I love you." Then comes those breath taking seconds were you wait to hear those words echo back to you, then if you do... WOW! I'm stumbling here... thank you addy, thank you.
Sincerely,
fd