05-01-2011, 08:00 AM
This is bloody gorgeous work. The emotion, the sometimes sedate but palpable pain... I especially love your narrative voice (which is very distinct in all your works), where the images and scenarios flow out like a deep, subconscious dream. There's a distinct lack of uptightness and guile to your flow and mental imaginary leaps... they sound deeply personal to you, and that very effectively sells it to the reader. I was hooked from beginning to end.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
