~Don't Look Back~
#9
This is bloody gorgeous work. The emotion, the sometimes sedate but palpable pain... I especially love your narrative voice (which is very distinct in all your works), where the images and scenarios flow out like a deep, subconscious dream. There's a distinct lack of uptightness and guile to your flow and mental imaginary leaps... they sound deeply personal to you, and that very effectively sells it to the reader. I was hooked from beginning to end.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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~Don't Look Back~ - by ficosdarkness - 04-27-2011, 10:51 PM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by billy - 04-28-2011, 05:56 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by ficosdarkness - 04-28-2011, 08:10 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by billy - 04-28-2011, 08:16 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by Ris Yerg - 04-28-2011, 02:45 PM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by ficosdarkness - 04-30-2011, 07:49 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by billy - 04-30-2011, 06:43 PM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by kath3 - 05-01-2011, 02:15 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by ficosdarkness - 05-01-2011, 01:28 PM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by addy - 05-01-2011, 08:00 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by billy - 05-01-2011, 08:33 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by heslopian - 05-02-2011, 02:33 AM
RE: ~Don't Look Back~ - by addy - 05-02-2011, 01:02 PM



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