~Don't Look Back~

[ficosdarkness]

Powerful! Powerful with feelings you put in this your work!
And I really like this your poem!
Thanks for sharing.
R.Y.

Thank you so much Ris! That means a great deal as I've enjoyed reading your work so much! It's good to know I returned a good read for a good read! Capital! Thanks again!

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nicely done in getting rid of the 'by' all together
my spelling sucks so i have to admit that it was my spell check that
spotted the possibilities

billy,
Why don't we have spell check on the sight? I'm sure that I'm not the only one that can use it. LOL! Just sayin'..
On the serious side I wanted to thank you again for your help with this piece. Shortening the sentences and changing the form was a brilliant piece of direction. It allowed me to look at my work from the readers perspective and I didn't know just how important that could be for a writer. I don't think that I've felt this good about any of my work to date! So this piece is dedicated to "maud' dib" :Relax: thanks for continuing to be patient, consistant and kind to me all at the same time, billy! You sir are a good man! I haven't said that often in my life, so I hope that you take it for what it's worth.
Sincerely,
fd