Impact

[billy]

Out of the dust bowl this line feels a little ambiguous to me
new flowers emerge, colours serene
yet perturbing. You place your hands on my thighs, this line and the one above feel just right
I squeeze the blanket, my knees resting great image
on cushions we chose especially for this.
More blooming. Pink leaves. Then indigo stalks is this the design of the cushions?
and hazel faces as you enter me
like a satellite drifting through space. the simile made me smile, i just thought of; we have entry houston. somehow i don't or cant conceive sexual entry as being like a satellite drifting through space.
The dust bowl is coming alive. Filling
with flowers, a scented leaf dish on a kitchen table.
But I've not seen these plants before. i concluded for this the dust bowl was a metaphor for the lack of love/lover and as such it makes a difference to the ambiguous line i wrote above

in truth struggled a little trying understand some of it jack, the image of the lovers was excellent, it was the dust bowl and though i think i may have gotten what was being expressed, i'm not sure, i'd like it to have a little more clarity. as usual it's original in it's telling.

thanks for the read as always .