"Dancing night."

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"Dancing night."

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04-09-2011, 02:37 PM

Something very, very haunting about this, even the way you ended it. Dark, lovely, and eerie.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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"Dancing night." - by Ris Yerg - 04-09-2011, 02:35 AM

RE: "Dancing night." - by addy - 04-09-2011, 02:37 PM

RE: "Dancing night." - by billy - 04-10-2011, 08:51 AM

RE: "Dancing night." - by Ris Yerg - 04-14-2011, 02:30 PM

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