04-09-2011, 01:20 AM
What an interesting write. Great images here.
I loved the 2nd wife line
"arrived like an orphan on the doorstep."
Having been a 2nd wife, I could certainly
identify with your feelings.
"I think of it locked away in the loft,
our home’s secret memory bank,
resting like a corpse among fibreglass fields. "
Fantastic ending.
Sue
I loved the 2nd wife line
"arrived like an orphan on the doorstep."
Having been a 2nd wife, I could certainly
identify with your feelings.
"I think of it locked away in the loft,
our home’s secret memory bank,
resting like a corpse among fibreglass fields. "
Fantastic ending.
Sue