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"Rings."
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03-28-2011, 07:42 AM
Can do with a bit of polish grammar-wise but wow... this has got a great core. I just love what this piece is saying. Those last few lines are just haunting.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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RE: "Rings." - by addy - 03-28-2011, 07:42 AM
RE: "Rings." - by billy - 03-28-2011, 09:33 PM
RE: "Rings." - by Verbavore - 03-29-2011, 01:39 PM
RE: "Rings." - by heslopian - 03-29-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: "Rings." - by Ris Yerg - 03-29-2011, 03:45 PM
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