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"To run to an extreme."
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03-28-2011, 07:37 AM
A fine thriller of a piece; just a couple of grammatical stuff that can be polished ("... need for a full excitement" doesn't quite read right) but other lines made me literally hold my breath. They were that good
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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"To run to an extreme." - by Ris Yerg - 03-24-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: "To run to an extreme." - by billy - 03-25-2011, 05:14 PM
RE: "To run to an extreme." - by Ris Yerg - 03-25-2011, 06:24 PM
RE: "To run to an extreme." - by addy - 03-28-2011, 07:37 AM
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