03-18-2011, 11:39 AM
you hit the nail on the head. you say twee (thats a yucky word as well hehe) i say yucky.
from my pov. Love Song is rather twee as well and it also makes us believe the poem will be about sods in love, which it does.
no twist there then. if you excuse the pun, it feels "tongue in cheek" the original is still a good title but i just felt it could be improved on. the options are almost limitless.
the sodomites and prucock ; sorry but that one made me laugh.
i will say that you should know best. you have the craft me thinks.
from my pov. Love Song is rather twee as well and it also makes us believe the poem will be about sods in love, which it does.
no twist there then. if you excuse the pun, it feels "tongue in cheek" the original is still a good title but i just felt it could be improved on. the options are almost limitless.
the sodomites and prucock ; sorry but that one made me laugh.
i will say that you should know best. you have the craft me thinks.