03-18-2011, 11:30 AM
no prob on the posting 
and no need for explanation i already made my mind up and though an explanation may make me see something else.
the comment is on what i originally saw
personally if someone doesn't get something i write i have three choices,
accept it as their pov and leave the verse as is, change it, or delete it.
indignation doesn't matter to him anymore,
he doesn't need to be angry at the people who laughed;
indignation is only for his modern fans, "those left alive"
that would have made a decent last line
and no need for explanation i already made my mind up
and though an explanation may make me see something else.the comment is on what i originally saw
personally if someone doesn't get something i write i have three choices,
accept it as their pov and leave the verse as is, change it, or delete it.
indignation doesn't matter to him anymore,
he doesn't need to be angry at the people who laughed;
indignation is only for his modern fans, "those left alive"
that would have made a decent last line