03-17-2011, 08:19 PM
Why is the word "consummation" yucky? I thought it was hopelessly twee
Or is that why you think it's yucky?
I don't understand what "Love Song" gives away that "The Sodomites" doesn't once you've read the first couple of lines. That said, I think "The Sodomites" is a better title nonetheless. It just seems more original. I'll change it once I've finished this.
Thanks as always for your kind words and feedback Billy. I'll remove the content warning in a mo. I was just worried in case Fred Phelps was a member of the site and might have a heart attack if he read a poem like this
Or is that why you think it's yucky?I don't understand what "Love Song" gives away that "The Sodomites" doesn't once you've read the first couple of lines. That said, I think "The Sodomites" is a better title nonetheless. It just seems more original. I'll change it once I've finished this.
Thanks as always for your kind words and feedback Billy. I'll remove the content warning in a mo. I was just worried in case Fred Phelps was a member of the site and might have a heart attack if he read a poem like this
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe