"Mother and Father" by thequietman

[billy]

This one is short and sweet,i hope you all like it..
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Mother you are the one who gave me this birth
Father you are the one who led me to this earth

I thank you both for giving me this light
Which led me into this world to it's beautifull sight

To see god's creatures in air and on ground
To see such beautiness on this earth that is round

I'll never forget you both for as long as i live
My love thats everlasting from my heart that i can give
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thequietman

thanks for posting tqm

the rhyme is spot on.
it' needs a little bit of work on the flow.
beautiful has 1 L and thats has a comma that's.