02-15-2011, 06:17 PM
Shit sorry I forgot to put a language warning on this Billy!
Thanks to you three for your lovely feedback. That latter of the diction verses was intended to be funny, Billy; that's the closest I get to real humour
You're not the first person to mention that line Addy, and I think I used it word for word in another poem not long ago; I'm plagiarising myself haha.
Thanks to you three for your lovely feedback. That latter of the diction verses was intended to be funny, Billy; that's the closest I get to real humour You're not the first person to mention that line Addy, and I think I used it word for word in another poem not long ago; I'm plagiarising myself haha.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe